My story about camp!

L.I To use the whole writing to complete a short piece of writing to a high standard L.I to recraft a sentence to improve vocabulary for effect L.I use a range of sentences CAMP Camp overall was absolutely AMAZING if i told you everything we did and what i enjoyed we would be here for a little while (maybe a month🤣) . so i hope you enjoy my story! Ahh the bus just arrived at hunua falls camp looks Cool. i was legitimately so happy just to get off the bus!! Walking down the driveway i got a better glimpse of everything place was very nice. I was so SO happy that i was in the new cabin i wasn't in the `double bed though. so that night i went to sleep. So the next day bigfoot has arrived so we could do mountain biking,flying kiwi,archery and rock climbing i enjoyed everything those days especially dinner and dessert. Bigfoot has left and we are still here today was the ultimate cabin day with a whole bunch of different activities i enjoyed the ultimate obstacle course the most. Friday was the big clean up i hated that day i only liked drawing the falls because it was so relaxing and calming. When we came back it was bus time and we left and got back to school.